Would someone like to proofread/review my poem?
Good poem; reminds me of something I read a couple years back about the Nice Guys. You know, the guys who never have a girl friend, but are always friends with girls. If you want a rhyme scheme, add it; as it is, it flows rather nicely. I like the repetition of “The Ones”, but I think you should use the repetition as the ending of your stanzas. To really complete the thought, remove the libido. It is already implied with your statements as loving eternally. Another draft and edit and this IMO will be a keeper. Keep writing, as with anything else, practice makes perfect.
