Who likes this poem I wrote to summit to school?
Well, I like your poem very much! It needs some work, but most poems submitted on line do! I’m a pretty good poet; had a few things published, and have been working at it for almost 40 years — no, exactly 40 years since I remember writing my first poem in 1968. I’ve learned during this time not to write poems that are this long because I cannot sustain a poetic voice or poetic thought that far! You really should think about shortening this. I’ll try to help you a little — but I won’t make any changes that keep it from being uniquely “your poem.” _____________________ Looking into the night, I see the stars, the moon and the sky. Sparkling stars represent all the twinkling eyes, And the moon is the heart that brightens our lives. The sky above is the warmth of love. I closed my eyes and wished and wished on a magnificient shooting star and opened again with joy and hope, but there was nothing left but my heart — and it broke. But I slept and woke and it all came true and here I am on my
