What is a good attention getter for an essay on The Heaviest Man Alive ?
I’m assuming that the title of your paper is, The Heaviest Man Alive, which I think is a very good attention grabber. Now, if you are looking for a first sentence… use it all over again: The heaviest man alive is Manuel Uribe. He is lives in Monterrey, Mexico. etc. or, Manuel Uribe has a special quality that he is not happy about; he is the heaviest man alive. Weighing in at —- lbs Mr Uribe lives in Monterrey, Mexico…. or, Manuel Uribe is the heaviest man alive. He is from…. You are right – saying “Who causes earthquakes with every jump” is offensive, and it isn’t actually true either. It trivializes something that is a great problem for him. He is actually a horrible case of being overweight. He hasn’t gotten out of bed since 2001. Not fun. Some how or another, he’s managed to be married twice, one time where he was in bed during the wedding… I’m fit as a fiddle and I can’t find a gf, so I should write him and ask him how its done. Hope your paper turns out well!
