Is this good literary analysis for repetition?
It’s a pretty good analysis. The biggest problem with using repetition to analyze is that 99.9% of the time people say that repetition emphasizes a point… something English teachers get tired of reading. Your analysis seems to go deeper than that, though. The problem with your analysis itself is that it needs further proofreading. You had a few grammatical mistakes (such as ‘,emotionally repetition’), and also some places where you sounded redundant (hear and feel her… just say one or the other). Teachers like it when you are concise. Don’t ramble.
