How could the topic sentences of paragraphs be improved?
For the ‘Brief History’ section a better introduction could be used. Is the writing objective? The writing is objective, however some more sources within the text would be helpful. No sources are stated at the end of the “Activated Sludge process” or the “Trickling Filter Process”. The references table should use the wiki formating. This will allow people to click the “[1]” or “[2]” within a paragraph to see its respective source. This is good because it does not clutter your page with references. Are the figures easy to understand? The one figure makes sense, it need to be properly sized though. Also, copyrights should be observed on the images. Make sure it is either your creation or under Creative Commons. A figure illustrating each of the two processes would be useful as well. Are the figures referred to in the text? The figures are currently not noted in the text. The figures also carry no descripton. The source information belongs on the image page. The caption should contain inf
