Ditto the media group – how exactly are the positive relations forged?
9. Excellent on the Hebrew. Delete the second reference to ‘broader understanding’ and simply say ‘something that has also developed my ability to work independently’. 10. Re-write final paragraph – ‘I am convinced that I have the academic ability, research skills and personal qualities to make a success of a History degree course, and look forward to the intellectual challenge, as well as to the opportunity to make a significant contribution to university life’.
