Conclusion For My english essay.. how can i improve it?
Hi. Here is how I would word it: In conclusion, I consider ‘Dulce Et Decorum Est’ to be the most effective piece Wilfred Owen has written because of its irony and truthfulness about the horror of war. I dislike blind and naïve poems that convey dying in war as patriotic. Unlike many other poets, such as Richard Brooke, Wilfred Owen conveys the abhorrence of war successfully by using powerful figurative language and structural features. I changed a few things: take out “in my opinion” and just use “I” replaced “passing away” with dying take out “personally” and just use “I dislike” take out the semicolon after Richard Brooke and just use a comma. That’s my 2-cents!
