Can you help me continue my story for english coursework please?!?
WAY too many commas. I woke in a cold sweat, panicked and frightened. Realising my terrible experience was just a nightmare, I sighed deeply with relief. In the darkness I looked around my empty room, staring through the small glass window, the eerie looking tree looming directly in front of it as its bony finger-like branches. They scratched as the wind whipped through its branch-like arms. The moon tucked up in the sky amongst the stars and the candle in the corner flickering, illuminated the specs of dust on the old wooden drawers, creating shadows upon the walls. This did not help, the fact that I was already feeling on-edge. Something in the distance caught my eye; a small glowing light peeked through the almost unnatural looking trees. It was a glistening figure, the moon shining upon it, dressed head to toe in white; it seemed as if it was a woman. She was almost weaving in and out of the bushes. I got up to take a closer a look and examined the spectres swaying silhouette. Her
