Can U plz help me with this opinion paragraph?
In my opinion, I believe it is a great idea that high school students have a part-time job. First of all, it gives a student money and secondly, work experience. With the extra money, a student can do a lot of fun things like buy games, go to the movies, buy presents for friends or help their family by earning their own pocket money. The work experience will help students get jobs in the future. However, many students and their parents think that having a part-time job interferes with studying. So many students lose their interest in getting a part-time job. I believe students should have a part-time job, because its better than not doing anything.
