Can someone tell me some rap bars please?
Rap is poetry set to a beat, get a dictionary(a rhyming one, rappers use them for writing), Your rap doesn’t even flow above, As the father I am broken hearted But I got to come, finish what I have started I was there at the beginning, I’ll be there at the end And I will not finish ’til you comprehend. Freinds is a word you use every day But most of the time you use it in the wrong way You can look the word up again and again But the dictionary doesn’t know the meaning of friends. These are 80’s raps, I’m 36 and do not get your modern raps, they are unintelligent, you need to listen to Rakim(Eric B & Rakim), Just Ice etc, some real old school, when rap was real and didn’t rely on swearing, course language and bad grammar. The people that formed hip hop were not silly people, they all had a plan and the original true school hate the way modern rap has become. Check the old school is my message to you, Real MC’s not pop rappers/Gangsta wannabees.
