Can someone please edit this concluding paragraph*10 points?
A multitude of people have differing opinions on the subject of building empires. Some believe that building empires can secure one’s nation’s culture and religion, while also providing a secure source of natural resources. These people would be considered ultra-nationalists, as empires are built by attacking other nations. Others believe that empires are the source of many lost cultures and wars. As these people are trying to promote global peace and preserve cultures, they can be deemed internationalist or nationalist. The ultra-nationalism of building an empire is clearly wrong and should be avoided. This ultra-nationalism has taken away lives through wars like the German invasion and destroyed many cultures and religion like the Moorish culture and religion. I don’t think your last sentence is a very good “concluding sentence,” as it kinda introduces a new concept – it needs to be an overall, general idea or concept. The second-to-last sentence would work well as the last sentence,
