Can someone please correct my english grammar?
Can someone please correct my English grammar? Leisure is very important in my life. It is part of my life and I cannot live without it. I love to spend my leisure time reading a book, surfing on(delete) the internet, playing video games, playing with my dog(insert a comma before “or” in a series) and listening to music. I think that listening to music is the best way to relax and relieve your stress ( . B) because you can listen to it everywhere you want and temporarily forget the problems you are facing. Nowadays teens are having much (change much to “many”) more ways to pass their leisure time than people in the past. For example, teens can spend two or three hours a day, playing video games and hand-held game consoles, which are very bad for them when they take it as (substitute “become”) a habit. Leisure time is the best period of time for me to relieve my stress gained from school and family. I think I might die without leisure time.
Leisure is very important in my life. It is part of my life and I could not live without it. I love to spend my leisure time reading a book, surfing on the internet, playing video games, playing with my dog and listening to music. I think that listening to music is the best way to relax and relieve your stress, because you can listen to it anywhere you want and temporarily forget the problems you are facing. Nowadays teenagers are having many more ways to pass their leisure time than they did in the past. For example, teenagers can spend two or three hours a day, playing video games and hand-held game consoles, which are very bad for them when they play them too often. Leisure time is the best period of time for me to relieve my stress from school and family. I don’t think I could live without my leisure time. Your grammar was, on the whole, very good.
