Can somebody revise or correct my sentences?
Lprod: March 20, 2010 at 8:11 pm There is a study showed that the United State is the most country that it’s people drinking soda — I would replace with: ACCORDING TO A STUDY, THE U.S. IS THE WORLD’S TOP SODA CONSUMMING COUNTRY. The largest customers for soda are teenagers and children — THE MAIN SODA CONSUMERS ARE TEENAGERS AND CHILDREN. …teenagers in the United States now drinking soda twice as much as milk — TEENAGERS IN THE U.S. DRINK TWICE AS MUCH SODA THAN THEY DO MILK NOWADAYS. Fifty-six percent of 8-year-olds down soft drinks daily — DOWN? YOU DIDN’T MEAN “DRINK”? We have all to think about the harmful effects of this drink in our bodies — WE ALL HAVE TO THINK ABOUT THE HARMFUL EFFECT THIS BEVERAGE HAS IN OUR BODIES. Soda causes many health problems that everyone can suffer from like fattiness, tooth decay, and caffeine dependence — SODA CAUSES MANY HEALTH PROBLEMS THAT ANYONE CAN SUFFER FROM, SUCH AS OBESITY, TOOTH DECAY AND ADDICTION TO CAFFEINE. It is made sure that sugar ca
