Can anyone help me write a thesis statement?
After taking five college english courses, the one thing that I have definitely learned is that a thesis sentence should be as concise as possible. You will use the body of your paper to support your thesis statement. With the information you gave me, I would think that a better thesis statement would be: By instituting uniform policies, a better enviroment will be created for all students because a lack of uniforms causes bullying, causes class levels among students, and causes students to buy clothes that are more expensive than they can afford. When you state your thesis sentence, make sure that you put it as close to the end of your introduction as possible. Then use each of the three supporting “arguments” as the opening argument to each of the paragraphs of the body of your paper. Make sure that you provide supporting evidence to support each of the arguments. For example, as support for the argument that students buy clothes that are more expensive than they can afford, you may
