Can anyone help me write a sonnet(14 lines of iambic pentameter)?
Well I won’t write it for you, but I do think you are honest so here’s some advice. Donne uses an inversion (DUM da instead of da DUM) in the first foot of the first line to stress the key verb, “batter”, and then sets up a clear iambic pattern with the rest of the line (da DUM da DUM da DUM da DUM). In lines 2 and 4 he uses spondees in the third foot to slow down the rhythm as he lists monosyllabic verbs. The parallel rhythm and grammar of these lines highlights the comparison Donne sets up between what God does to him “as yet” (knock, breathe, shine and seek to mend”), and what he asks God to do (“break, blow, burn and make me new”). Donne also uses enjambment between lines 3 and 4 to speed up the flow as he builds to his desire to be made new. To further the quickening effect of the enjambment, Donne puts an extra syllable in the final foot of the line (this can be read as an anapest (dada DUM) or as an elision). As the examples show, iambic pentameter need not consist entirely of i
