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A straight love poem from The Dark Prince. How did I do.?

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A straight love poem from The Dark Prince. How did I do.?

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As I have said before, you have talent for writing much more than the dark poetry we see. You have done well here, and although the 6 beats in each line tend to make it a bit jerky, the language used makes it fit quite nicely. Good Job.

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It is quite a love poem, and your girlfriend should feel the love your pour out to her. It’s almost, “here, I give you the sky to see forever, the lake to play and have all your needs met..” Perfection. You achieved what you wanted!

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I liked it, very romantic poem man 🙂 good and simple poem but effective! I liked the phrase like fresh rain, i dont know why i just did…

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A beautiful love poem. No darkness here. Only brightness and the light of love – eternal love. This poem’s a keeper.

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GOOD POEM YOUR A GOOSD WRITEING KEEP WRITEING LOVE POEM S YOUR GOOD AT IT!!

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